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    Author: Daniel Barlow
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    what i need you to understand is that i am not the tip of the spear. nor even the toe. but simply part of something generational ~ millions of years. with all that rich history at our backs we
    are an irresistible force. counted from within.
    a wind stirring up water.





    Submitted on 2018-10-28 13:47:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Indeed, our genetic heritage goes all the way back to the prime amoeba. Our ancestors are multifariously diverse and almost innumerable. There's a tempestuously torrential unity to our cellular nuclei. Each and every one of us an almost exponentially extemporaneous extrapolation. As you said "an irresistible force". Ominous phenomenon portrayal spontaneous synchronous.
    | Posted on 2018-10-28 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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