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    dots Submission Name: I am a sorry son.dots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 311/245/330
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 721
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 543



    Description:
       One fateful night I decided to act on impulse. I erased my poetry from this site one by one and my actual blog from another site as well - the more recent pieces there that were possibly my greatest.
    If only you knew how sorry I can be about this.


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    dotsI am a sorry son.dots
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    all the things I could have kept saying
    and all the people I could have kept leading
    lagging with all that beaming glory
    now as it flashes like a distant ray

    the past it will haunt me
    this I know too well
    when my face it taunts me
    with what I shall ever dwell

    I am sorry
    for that I have deprived
    Of Heaven's true essence
    and all it did prescribe,
    Do remark that I once sang true
    the silver spoon I now give to you
    The World.




    Submitted on 2018-11-17 22:51:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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