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    dots Submission Name: In God's Namedots
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    Author: poetotoe
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    dotsIn God's Namedots
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    In God's Name

    Let us witness the birth of life
    as gods before we destroy it all
    their labor pains-savage screams
    that fouls the very air they breathe.

    How dare humans some empowered
    by these gods, they worship and exist
    as mere humans parts for sale, not life
    their code of ethics, not their god's will.

    Some live by; some do die by their rights
    their minor gods in tabloids daily, weekly
    for, as if their curtain, was not torn in two
    by whom they denied had others to crucify.




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