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Submission Name: Two hundred and seven times dots

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Author:	MyPeriodical
ASL Info:	18/m/pr
Elite Ratio:	4.18 - 310/245/329
Words:	96

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
Total Views:	473
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	623

Description:
One two and seven
What a funny story

Two hundred and seven times dots

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I'm gonna talk
So my words can bring to life someone new
And I'm gonna walk
Until my muscle melts into my bones
And the ligaments stick to them like glue

I'm gonna sigh 'til everyone figures out that I matter not
I can hear you lie
Boring holes into an Earth that doesn't rot

Ignore the signs from beings on high
The hierarchy that won't let us die
They can wear you off from your suffering
And tear you from the ageless sin
But just like your pageless offerings
The numbers never give.

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.