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    dots Submission Name: Two hundred and seven timesdots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 310/245/329
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 473
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 623



    Description:
       One two and seven
    What a funny story


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    dotsTwo hundred and seven timesdots
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    I'm gonna talk
    So my words can bring to life someone new
    And I'm gonna walk
    Until my muscle melts into my bones
    And the ligaments stick to them like glue

    I'm gonna sigh 'til everyone figures out that I matter not
    I can hear you lie
    Boring holes into an Earth that doesn't rot

    Ignore the signs from beings on high
    The hierarchy that won't let us die
    They can wear you off from your suffering
    And tear you from the ageless sin
    But just like your pageless offerings
    The numbers never give.




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