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    dots Submission Name: Quoth The Skies and its limitsdots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.24 - 310/239/314
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Prose/Nature
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    dotsQuoth The Skies and its limitsdots
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    There is a wet soil
    For the feet without sandals
    And vine to entangle should the legs grow still

    Like an animal the mind grazes
    Into the ground like the Earth were a socket
    An endless portal to life without death

    In such ways an empty affluence
    Seeking righteousness among the condemned.

    Was reality always just a screen
    Before those without mirrors?




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