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    dots Submission Name: Tired Vinedots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 310/245/329
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsTired Vinedots
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    In such ways the plant dangles mid air
    For the hand to grasp with tender care

    Where it grows from no one knows
    Like the serpent it appears just so

    Carrying weight in the multiples of their own
    Does the neck strain as the face is shown

    Candid is the mind impaired by its movement everywhere
    Contradicting in itself that paradise be kindled there.




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