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    dots Submission Name: Meditations onedots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 310/245/329
    Words: 26
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsMeditations onedots
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    In just a moment you will find
    Somewhere sound to clear the mines
    Where soldiers shout from the gutter
    Into the sound that does not stutter




    Submitted on 2018-11-22 16:13:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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