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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.97 - 2131/2091/1621
    Words: 218
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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                        1.


              having hailed me into the labyrinth.
              go ahead. leave me in the dark.

         

              if that is your thing.














                        2.





              because a person, people.
              will twist - just so.
              doubling your back
              on itself.

         

              securing. your wrist to your
              ankle.

























                        3.











              Women.

         

              Particularly.






























                        4.























              is it too great an expectation for love to be met
              and meted out - equally where that love is present?

         




















              not by right.





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