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    dots Submission Name: Leyenda de Un Maldito Cobardedots

    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.24 - 310/239/314
    Words: 117
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    dotsLeyenda de Un Maldito Cobardedots

    Las palabras sacrificadas por el poder de tu dolor
    Mira como te velan
    Los Ángeles que ciclican tu máximo ardor

    En par con los buitres que contra ti se manifiestan
    Porque ahora sí que te demanda el ser de la justicia
    Lo que les prometiste a los hijos de la tercera guerra

    Supiste demasiado la realidad que creaste
    Un mundo al revés del que soñaste

    Perdido en el espacio y por dentro de la contradicción
    Que dice tu nombre sobre la salvación
    Quemadas las brujas
    Tantas por el maestro, tú, mi profesor

    Hemos ido ya por este sufrimiento
    Y, sin embargo, lamento tanto por lo que te falta de sufrir
    Mi amor.

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