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    dots Submission Name: Survive ed - right back at the beginningdots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.26 - 303/232/297
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsSurvive ed - right back at the beginningdots
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    You'll never know when you're in aid
    Of the only persons left to save
    When you're right back at your pain
    Wishing that it weren't the same
    Underneath all this pressure
    Of a favor that couldn't be kept
    And they'll watch when you resent
    The only plausible tendon bent
    Because the world is old and wild
    Out of order
    Dismembered and defiled

    The only gods that are left
    Bring to justice their infinite jest
    That we are descendents at the ultimate descent
    Of an age defined by our last attempt

    To survive.




    Submitted on 2018-11-30 20:44:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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