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    dots Submission Name: A Donde Llegamosdots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.22 - 304/236/304
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 345
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    dotsA Donde Llegamosdots
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    No pierdas la onda de aquél río que inunda
    A aquellas lemas que no enseñan
    La gran arquitecta de leña, embaraza la panza dura de pena

    Susurrando las voces
    Que tratan de eliminar
    Lo verdadero humano
    Lo determinado y real

    Los veo, mis ancestros
    Ascendidos a lo diestro
    El lado derecho
    Que aún le falta encorvar

    Luego se finalizará
    El fallecimiento de la creencia
    El fanatismo de los que
    Quieren ya morir

    El mundo hablará
    Y postulara más a las cosas pedulantes
    Que dé un libreto a las vidas
    Que buscan por qué leer.




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