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    dots Submission Name: The annointed one is persecuted.dots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 311/245/330
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsThe annointed one is persecuted.dots
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    As I said before - the truth became much like an afterthought
    And the world its strong opposer
    That though there is a reasoning beyond logic
    We should shed like tears the hairlocks of the carrierer
    That borrows only time.




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