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Author: robbie
ASL Info:    20/m/mi
Elite Ratio:    2.78 - 53 /54 /37
Words: 160
Class/Type: Poetry /Venting
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Time to release time to vent
So much energy have I spent
To show you I'm worth the chance
Things go great then back to a defensive stance
You take one brick down then put 3 in its place
At this rate ill never win this race
I put in all that I can and still I Try
Ill stay strong as a rock but still I cry
I'm lost I don't get what there is left to do
I must look like a fool to you
You open up then shut me out
Going in circles like a round about
You say I make you happy safe and content
A day later a different message is sent
I'm lost confused and some what scared
I've told you all that I've bared
I toss and turn with loss of sleep
I guess to really show you my worth it wont be cheap

Submitted on 2018-12-05 21:12:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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