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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.26 - 303/232/297
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    It's really hard to feel sunny
    In a world that acts so passively
    About your courage to be alive

    Those without family
    Or friends with whom to discuss with
    Who made you so strong?

    In times of great epiphany,
    Do you speak or say aloud
    Or do you seek the Lord out
    To grant him your thanks?

    Wonder the wiser
    And all its abundance
    Not in fulfillment
    But in God's grace.

    It will seem most times
    That his favor is with others
    Or that she wants something else

    But look around you
    With satisfaction
    Should they question
    Let them
    Look in
    To your self.




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