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    dots Submission Name: Rememberdots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 310/245/329
    Words: 15
    Class/Type: Haiku/Longing
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    dotsRememberdots
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    Remembering you
    And these blocks I walk around
    They tumbled on their own I swear.




    Submitted on 2018-12-07 02:49:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Tumbled rhymes with stumbled... I like poetry that makes me think a bit.

    Short and sweet.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2018-12-07 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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