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    dots Submission Name: To Bedots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 310/245/329
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Haiku/Trapped
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    dotsTo Bedots
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    What if I can say
    Goodbye to all the saiyans
    And just nullify

    What a great backhand
    That our Father has forgiven
    By those before us

    What if I can say
    Goodbye to all my shadows
    And my reflections




    Submitted on 2018-12-08 18:06:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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