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    Author: _winky_
    ASL Info:    25/f/minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 664/529/96
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    I hate the world around me
    I hate my world within
    Why can't I let things be
    These feelings can never win

    All I seem to do is fail
    This pain will never heal
    Fingers clawing at the scale
    I hate the way I feel

    I wish that those around me
    Would stop just walking by
    Open up their eyes for once
    Watch the tears fall as I cry

    I hate the life I am living
    I hate the choices I've made
    I feel like I just keep giving
    And who I am continues to fade


    Perhaps the world is better off without me in it........




    Submitted on 2018-12-12 11:30:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I can honestly say that I have felt like this many times. Controlling one's emotions is very hard especially if you don't talk to people about how you feel.

    I have recently learned that the mere act of speaking allows you to see and analyse things in a different way or it may allow you to make a good decision. Therapy also helps a lot, to my mind.

    From where I am standing, experience, as well as knowing my self better have allowed my to feel better or to be in control of my emotions.

    I guess that what worries one is the past and future but we forget about the present which is the only time that really matters. The only moment where we are actually living. The past will never be changed so we just have to let it go. The future doesn't really exist.


    Hope you feel better:)

    Ethan
    | Posted on 2018-12-18 00:00:00 | by Ethan Brody | [ Reply to This ]
      Ow. You nailed depressing. But really, people want hugging and kissing and loving. Doesn't matter if some of them are dicks, just matters how you feel. Depressed isn't good.
    | Posted on 2018-12-14 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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