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    dots Submission Name: Next to youdots
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    Author: robbie
    ASL Info:    20/m/mi
    Elite Ratio:    2.8 - 53/52/35
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 131
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    dotsNext to youdots
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    I lay awake as you sleep so sound
    So happy for you and the feelings found
    Fighting the urge to give you a kiss
    You look so peaceful in your sleeping bliss
    Don't mind me as I watch you sleep
    All my heart is for you to keep
    I lie next to you writing this
    At that moment I get a sleepy kiss
    Running my fingers thru your hair
    You're sound asleep with out a care
    My arms wrapped around you holding you tight
    Every day I wake up next to you feels so right
    You press up close locking hands with mine
    I would lie here all day with you if I could
    I promise to treat you like a real man should
    Your so beautiful and amazing too
    I love every second of the day with you
    But these are just my morning thoughts as you sleep
    Laying next to you trying not to make a peep






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