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    dots Submission Name: Rose colored glassesdots
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    Author: taintedsmiles
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 64/90/75
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsRose colored glassesdots
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    The quiet girl wears rose colored glasses.
    Yet, no one, but her notices cracks, and
    scratches.
    Where truth seeps through blinding iris’s,
    and only she knows how long-
    it takes to refocus.
    She stays silent.
    The colors of the rose:
    she knows it shows-
    the way things should be right,
    but wrong is where light-
    shines through the cracks.
    But, as she is so quiet
    (trying hard not to fight it).
    No one, but she, can see it:
    The heartache in the holes...
    The comfort of the rose;
    falling to the brim of her nose-
    from sliding salty tears that almost expose:
    all of the light from the cracks, and scratches.
    As he silently pushes up-
    her rose colored glasses.




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