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    Author: taintedsmiles
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 64/90/75
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    I sit here with time
    Waiting to go by
    Trying so hard to ease my mind
    I talk with myself
    Inside of this head
    Fighting for calm
    Anxiety instead
    I don’t want to be alone
    But really I know
    That I have to
    Have to let go
    Or hold onto so
    Many
    Thoughts
    Questions
    Hurt feelings
    And expectations
    For answers that aren’t there
    Pouring down tears
    That I can’t explain.




    Submitted on 2018-12-18 23:07:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this reminds me of so many pieces that i've written that i have forced myself to let go. it may be depriving of what's self-worth, but sometimes necessary to get to the sources of our pride and vanquish them.
    this piece under-rules what is our pride, what helps us from sucking up those tears to keep them for happier moments - moments when we cry not due to anguish but to joy. i hope you have those. i don't know if the piece is personal, but it reads like it.
    love your icon, love you, more importantly. don't let the healing stop.
    | Posted on 2019-03-24 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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