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    dots Submission Name: Begin Againdots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/71
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 80
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 354



    Description:
       Just something I found on an old school paper of mine.


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    dotsBegin Againdots
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    Let it go, see the blood red snow
    Drink it in and begin again.
    You're beautiful no matter what they say
    So let the haters hate and just keep up your game.
    Don't give up. Don't let them win.
    I'll always be here for you, my family and friends,
    But I'm afraid it's time to begin again.




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