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Begin Again

Author: Teofila
ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
Elite Ratio:    0.4 - 210 /104 /71
Words: 57
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Just something I found on an old school paper of mine.

Begin Again

Let it go, see the blood red snow
Drink it in and begin again.
You're beautiful no matter what they say
So let the haters hate and just keep up your game.
Don't give up. Don't let them win.
I'll always be here for you, my family and friends,
But I'm afraid it's time to begin again.

Submitted on 2018-12-28 16:36:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Give it up, the dead are dead!
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