Challenge - Msg to a Mountain Lynx by Daniel Barlow

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Submission Name: Challenge - Msg to a Mountain Lynx dots

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Author:	Daniel Barlow
Elite Ratio:	5.97 - 2130/2091/1620
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Challenge - Msg to a Mountain Lynx dots

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     i love you - because you are so perfectly feline.
     it's only my opinion - but quite possibly you are
     the most delectable creature God has ever created.
     and i think - most animals - any animal would get bug-eyed
     & bunny eared, bow down in your presence, turn tail
     and hop it. but i am a wolverine.

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Hello, Mr. Barlow.

Good to see you are still here, and still as amazing as always.

I enjoyed how you pulled the predatory instinct out at the end; how it implies the chase will forever continue.

'Bug-eyed and bunny-eared' is sweet.

Cheers,
Erin

| Posted on 2019-02-04 00:00:00 | by Soul-Hugger | [ Reply to This ]

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