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    dots Submission Name: Challenge - Msg to a Mountain Lynxdots
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    Author: Daniel Barlow
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsChallenge - Msg to a Mountain Lynxdots
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         i love you - because you are so perfectly feline.
         it's only my opinion - but quite possibly you are
         the most delectable creature God has ever created.
         and i think - most animals - any animal would get bug-eyed
         & bunny eared, bow down in your presence, turn tail
         and hop it. but i am a wolverine.













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      Hello, Mr. Barlow.

    Good to see you are still here, and still as amazing as always.

    I enjoyed how you pulled the predatory instinct out at the end; how it implies the chase will forever continue.

    'Bug-eyed and bunny-eared' is sweet.

    Cheers,
    Erin
    | Posted on 2019-02-04 00:00:00 | by Soul-Hugger | [ Reply to This ]


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