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Author: Daniel Barlow
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Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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     i love you - because you are so perfectly feline.
     it's only my opinion - but quite possibly you are
     the most delectable creature God has ever created.
     and i think - most animals - any animal would get bug-eyed
     & bunny eared, bow down in your presence, turn tail
     and hop it. but i am a wolverine.













Submitted on 2018-12-30 02:56:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Hello, Mr. Barlow.

Good to see you are still here, and still as amazing as always.

I enjoyed how you pulled the predatory instinct out at the end; how it implies the chase will forever continue.

'Bug-eyed and bunny-eared' is sweet.

Cheers,
Erin
| Posted on 2019-02-04 00:00:00 | by Soul-Hugger | [ Reply to This ]


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