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    dots Submission Name: Happy New Obliviondots

    Author: Pietro
    ASL Info:    30/m/cebu
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 300/176/37
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Alcoholocaust was a writer here once. Nicked that bit from his username

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    dotsHappy New Obliviondots

    Happy New Oblivion
    One and all!
    For what is a New Year
    But a single revolution
    ‘Round a star
    Hitchhiking on Atlas’ back?

    What is one year
    To a floating rock’s dance
    That has completed its finite circuit
    4.5 billion times?

    So a toast!
    To oblivion
    And to our own
    And naïveté,
    Rejoice in the briefness of our existence.

    I raise my cup to you
    And drink deep
    The alcoholocaust.

    So I say, sweet cheers one and all!
    We greet oblivion with open arms
    Embracing it as much as it embraces

    Happy New..

    -fardo baggins
    With love

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