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    dots Submission Name: potpourridots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 311/245/331
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 785
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 245



    Description:
       I was looking somewhere
    I can't look anywhere but like I did.


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    dotspotpourridots
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    Become ghosts
    In time as you have it
    Where it may ever truly be

    O' Wise Ones
    Do you see?
    O' Wise Ones
    Have you only become the dark essences of a long journey
    To nowhere?




    Submitted on 2019-01-01 01:37:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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