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    dots Submission Name: Agitationsdots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.22 - 307/238/312
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsAgitationsdots
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    Sanctimonious irreality
    Irritability in the finest sense
    To learn of what is comprised of
    Your ultimate hatred

    Envy
    Evil what it does
    To teach precisely what you couldn't stand
    About the ones you served and loved

    Compromising our truths
    To ignore what it relies
    On the basis of our repentance
    To survive

    Learning how to die
    But not to give death
    The power it so desires
    Such as our greed
    That brought us everything from its foggy mire.




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