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    dots Submission Name: Mei dots
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    Author: Chelebel
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    Words: 214
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    dotsMei dots
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    Tuti Bena
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    Somewhere between hope and hopeless
    Your battle battered me up.
    The cancer ate me away.




    Last night I put my focus on you
    I wanted to see you in my dreams
    You took me to the places you have seen
    then you showed me your final days.



    Your skinny knees......



    With the help of your hand
    Lifting underneath the knee
    To move your legs one by one



    I believe I saw your
    last meal in public


    your last signed
    receipt

    The fragile
    handwriting


    The shaken pen syndrome


    You were withering and weak
    A sack of bones depleted, void
    Of your immense energy.

    Waiting for something
    Waiting for relief

    Good grief?

    I grieve.


    Not the dream
    I'd foreseen
    Heartbreaking
    Tearing me away
    From the sheets

    Waking up crying


    In a crowd of
    A hundred thousand
    I would find you
    In a galaxy of billions
    You find me in one night

    The tears keep streaming




    Submitted on 2016-01-06 08:03:56




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      This is heartbreaking and lovely, Chelbel.

    It is horrific to watch cancer take one we love, to watch them become a shell of their former selves. It eats at us too, in its own way, but to know your loved one knows you will always see them as the energetic and vital being regardless.

    I enjoyed your play on words, and it was fitting here; battle / battered, good grief / I grieve; a punch in the gut.



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