Remnants

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Remnants

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The flow has receded to algae coated pools, sludgy backwaters sluggish with heat, but the corroded cliff walls remain to show what the water took. Layer by layer, the current bit steadily through soil and down to bedrock. Now, the bleached bones of nature's quarry lie white and angular in the sun, rock dust washed down to sea.

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Really excellent imagery. The picture is so vivid... you feel the waste left by the water.. the barren jaggedness. Brava! ~Doh

| Posted on 2019-04-27 00:00:00 | by rememberplaydoh | [ Reply to This ]

Stellar.

| Posted on 2019-02-19 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]

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