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    dots Submission Name: Remnants dots
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    Author: Soul-Hugger
    ASL Info:    33/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 409/220/65
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsRemnants dots
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    The flow has receded to algae coated pools,
    sludgy backwaters sluggish with heat,
    but the corroded cliff walls remain
    to show what the water took.

    Layer by layer, the current bit steadily
    through soil and down to bedrock.

    Now, the bleached bones of nature's quarry
    lie white and angular in the sun,
    rock dust washed down to sea.




    Submitted on 2019-02-06 20:37:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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