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    dots Submission Name: What its likedots
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    Author: robbie
    ASL Info:    20/m/mi
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 53/54/36
    Words: 187
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 388
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    dotsWhat its likedots
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    Do you know what it's like to feel alone in a crowded room
    stuck in your mind with thoughts begin to zoom
    here take this pill to make it all go away
    I hated living that way day to day
    do you know what it's like to be a prisoner of your own mind
    looking for a way out but there's nothing to find
    The pens ink bleeds like blood from my vein
    do you know how hard it is with all this to try to stay sane
    the pen is my sword and paper my shield
    to protect me from all the thoughts I have to wield
    as the blood I mean ink starts to flow
    anxiousness fades and my heart beats slow
    it's time for the battle of the wit
    as a alone in my mind I sit
    Surrounded by people and friends all the same
    Don't get me wrong there is nobody to blame
    Again I ask do you know what it's like to feel alone in a crowded room




    Submitted on 2019-02-16 13:11:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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