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Simply the same, but quite different.


Author: eggshells
ASL Info:    23/M/WA
Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 31 /82 /75
Words: 54
Class/Type: Deep Thought /Me
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Simply the same, but quite different.



You remind me
Of me.

I made a lot of the same
Mistakes as you,
And some different ones.

When you look at me,
I hope you see
A little bit of me,

Cause when I look at you,
I see
A lot of me.

You remind me
Of me.




Submitted on 2019-02-16 21:45:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I thought of this write ,a happier side. the refreshing points are so timeless there is no point in expanding on them./ So, u /r like me/ as / we are like us / Ah / so true,,,
| Posted on 2019-03-03 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]
  Hi!

Your poem reminds me of a layman's version of Namaste; the soul in me honors and recognizes the soul in you.

Erin
| Posted on 2019-02-18 00:00:00 | by Soul-Hugger | [ Reply to This ]


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