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Author:	eggshells
ASL Info:	23/M/WA
Elite Ratio:	3.16 - 29/77/69
Words:	54

Class/Type:	Deep Thought/Me
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Simply the same, but quite different. dots

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You remind me
Of me.

I made a lot of the same
Mistakes as you,
And some different ones.

When you look at me,
I hope you see
A little bit of me,

Cause when I look at you,
I see
A lot of me.

You remind me
Of me.

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I thought of this write ,a happier side. the refreshing points are so timeless there is no point in expanding on them./ So, u /r like me/ as / we are like us / Ah / so true,,,
| Posted on 2019-03-03 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]
Hi!

Your poem reminds me of a layman's version of Namaste; the soul in me honors and recognizes the soul in you.

Erin
| Posted on 2019-02-18 00:00:00 | by Soul-Hugger | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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