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    dots Submission Name: Obliviondots
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    Author: TheStillSilence
    ASL Info:    20/F/Out in Outer Space
    Elite Ratio:    4.97 - 180/113/59
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    I want to write you into oblivion; out of my mind, out of my life, out of my thoughts, out of my feelings.
    You’ve weaved your essence into every synaptic nerve and I need to get you out.
    A purge of all relations, flowing through steel blue ink, maybe onto a page that will get lost with receipts in my moving boxes.
    There you’ll stay, and I will have forgotten where I put you, but that will be for the best. I’ll find new life to balance the dust that you will gather.
    But first I need to write you out: every touch, every kiss, every twirl and every sway. Every heartbeat that you felt slow down and every breath that I felt speed up. Every plan we made and every experience we embraced. Every note you sang and every word I wrote; I have to write them all into oblivion so that I can move on.




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      this is pretty relate able. i don't think writing things away really works though. the whole process might just add to the memory. at least that's how it is for me. it's something i've tried but never was successful with. writing things down and coming to terms with them works for me, so in a way if the writing leads to moving on i guess it's true enough.
    | Posted on 2019-04-18 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]
      You're telling it like it is, isn't it. I like the style of writing. If you had handwritten this, I can almost imagine the bold, deep pen-strokes. Evokes great imagery. Especially the reference to the receipts in the moving boxes. Great stuff.
    | Posted on 2019-03-05 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]


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