Oblivion

Author: TheStillSilence ASL Info:    20/F/Out in Outer Space Elite Ratio:    4.97 - 180 /113 /59 Words: 1

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Oblivion

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Submitted on 2019-02-19 12:25:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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this is pretty relate able. i don't think writing things away really works though. the whole process might just add to the memory. at least that's how it is for me. it's something i've tried but never was successful with. writing things down and coming to terms with them works for me, so in a way if the writing leads to moving on i guess it's true enough.

| Posted on 2019-04-18 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]

You're telling it like it is, isn't it. I like the style of writing. If you had handwritten this, I can almost imagine the bold, deep pen-strokes. Evokes great imagery. Especially the reference to the receipts in the moving boxes. Great stuff.

| Posted on 2019-03-05 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]

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