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    dots Submission Name: Ahogodots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.23 - 307/237/311
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsAhogodots
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    Te ví
    Pero, ¿para qué?
    Si aquel día era más para anombrarte

    El gobernador de mis sueños y presidente

    De mi país

    Rey del mundo
    En donde morí, ¡morí! Morí, por fin, salí

    De ese infierno
    Del ahogo de aquel charco
    Infinito del amor
    Que tuve por ti.




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