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    dots Submission Name: Cansansiodots

    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.22 - 310/240/321
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    La Luna plena
    Nos mira bien
    Y no nos juzga
    Por la obligación del Ser

    Como el cordero brillante
    Como una estrella muriendose
    En el fallecimiento
    De todo lo nuestro
    Asi el mil diestro
    En búsqueda del porque

    ¿Y para que huir?
    Si de todos modos nos quedamos en la nada
    En esa nada

    Que jamás se librará
    De su propio esclavitud
    Como los quinientos que tienen demás
    Para comer.

    Submitted on 2019-02-19 23:13:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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