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    dots Submission Name: Cansansiodots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 311/245/330
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsCansansiodots
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    La Luna plena
    Nos mira bien
    Y no nos juzga
    Por la obligación del Ser
    Humano.

    Como el cordero brillante
    Como una estrella muriendose
    En el fallecimiento
    De todo lo nuestro
    Asi el mil diestro
    En búsqueda del porque

    ¿Y para que huir?
    Si de todos modos nos quedamos en la nada
    En esa nada
    Absoluta.

    Tiempo
    Que jamás se librará
    De su propio esclavitud
    Como los quinientos que tienen demás
    Para comer.




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