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    dots Submission Name: Abyss (credit to Carina)dots
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    Author: Debauchery
    ASL Info:    60/NA/Mars
    Elite Ratio:    1.48 - 2/5/6
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
    Total Views: 400
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Damn, I really relate to this. Even though I''m over my bout of suicidal attempts now, I still feel these thoughts creeping up, threatening to consume me if I let my guard down for even a moment.

    The only thing that really helps is going outside and breathing deeply until I've calmed down. It can still be a struggle though.


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    dotsAbyss (credit to Carina)dots
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    Her sadness hung around her
    Like a suit of tailored tears.
    And her vision started to blur
    Knowing she lost someone dear.
    Goodbyes always hurt the most
    When the story wasn't finished
    When opportunities were missed
    And potential is diminished.
    She gazed into the black abyss
    Thinking about what could have been.
    The abyss gazed back into her
    Its loneliness crawled under her skin.
    But she heard a whisper in the wind
    Saw the sun's diamond glints on snow
    A lonely lark appeared to sing
    A song that only she could know.
    It made her step back from the brink
    Of the river that can't be conquered twice
    For she was never left behind;
    on his way to paradise.




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