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    dots Submission Name: Humanity's Loss, Humanity's Gain | prt tdots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 311/245/330
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       point being we're already dead.


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    dotsHumanity's Loss, Humanity's Gain | prt tdots
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    at around three minutes into The Noose by APC you'll hear that you should expect to pay amends to the dead
    i make the gesture of looking into a mirror and tell myself for the umpteenth time
    so much death in one person's eyes
    and just not enough time to die.




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