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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 311/245/330
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsundetermineddots
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    They think to be so small
    What true to me is as big as the rock they mine
    Endless
    With what point but to create? As the mind runs wild in its most habitual ways.
    As microscopic as you think you are
    Is as massive
    As God feels to be

    But here I am
    Standing on my last quarter
    Knowing just about everything
    Like He thinks He does.




    Submitted on 2019-02-24 19:50:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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