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    dots Submission Name: Understanding the pain of growthdots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 310/245/329
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsUnderstanding the pain of growthdots
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    Growing too big for the miniature toys
    Like patrons of an age forthcoming
    Aggressive to the point of maturing
    Like a fruit picked ripe and innocent
    Doomed to the classical descent mistaken for purging.




    Submitted on 2019-03-02 06:04:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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       The idea of us losing the connection to who we once were. With age, is beautiful and unfortunately true.

    Keeping this concise is a smart decision.
    Personally feels more like an accentuated point of the shortness of childhood.
    | Posted on 2019-03-22 00:00:00 | by obsidiandreams | [ Reply to This ]


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