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    dots Submission Name: undaunted dots
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    Author: teika5
    ASL Info:    46 / m/ parts unknow
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 46/9/20
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Prose/Venting
    Total Views: 66
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 799



    Description:
       I pile of words to pack on my back. like the home that is missing , This work is derived from a push too, a sort of genocide of a way to survive this world . Also out of Fear i am undaunted, and yet live with the memorie of this


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    They chase me ,
    running over meanings of me,
    I get lost in their violence , and ,,
    they are vary capable of doing me harm,

    They , society at large ,
    has judge me , a homeless thing ,
    something to chase out and mock,
    to them I am not a person
    just a thing ,,,,,,

    Though , the encounter is all passive ,
    the voice spoken is vary clear,,
    "We don't like your kind,"

    in my head the yelling of who I am ,,
    is at odds , with all truthfulness ,
    yes,,I made the choices of a Dolt .

    the complication of you , society
    is a un-easy one and over all,
    you'll have to follow through
    until then I live ,
    undaunted ..




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