[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: undaunted dots

    Author: teika5
    ASL Info:    46 / m/ parts unknow
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 46/9/20
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Prose/Venting
    Total Views: 484
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 799

       I pile of words to pack on my back. like the home that is missing , This work is derived from a push too, a sort of genocide of a way to survive this world . Also out of Fear i am undaunted, and yet live with the memorie of this

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsundaunted dots

    They chase me ,
    running over meanings of me,
    I get lost in their violence , and ,,
    they are vary capable of doing me harm,

    They , society at large ,
    has judge me , a homeless thing ,
    something to chase out and mock,
    to them I am not a person
    just a thing ,,,,,,

    Though , the encounter is all passive ,
    the voice spoken is vary clear,,
    "We don't like your kind,"

    in my head the yelling of who I am ,,
    is at odds , with all truthfulness ,
    yes,,I made the choices of a Dolt .

    the complication of you , society
    is a un-easy one and over all,
    you'll have to follow through
    until then I live ,
    undaunted ..

    Submitted on 2019-03-02 11:03:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Luchinushka written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Exult written by saartha
    Fizzy Love written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Outside the Chain written by Wolfwatching
    motivations, eclectic. written by Daniel Barlow
    Spaces written by Daniel Barlow
    Ahem written by Daniel Barlow
    For serious written by Daniel Barlow
    Sweet You written by Daniel Barlow
    The written by Hazy skies
    Sun-meeting written by Daniel Barlow
    Wisp of You written by rev.jpfadeproof
    your feet, your flared nostrils, your forearms written by Daniel Barlow
    Hurt written by rev.jpfadeproof
    a trish poem written by Daniel Barlow
    The Inate written by MyPeriodical
    Beloved written by Daniel Barlow
    TSC written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Forgetting You written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Collision written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Buried written by MyPeriodical
    Blinded by Sight written by Torie
    Variety written by saartha
    5/29/2019 written by nolram
    Roots written by Chelebel
    Terrified part three written by MyPeriodical
    Sólo por pensar asi written by MyPeriodical
    Ardent written by saartha
    Things become tangled written by Daniel Barlow
    Orange written by saartha




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]