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    Author: Outlaw
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 510/413/196
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 369
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       I had the words "nightmare overwhelming" stuck in my mind, so I thought I'd come back to the age old solution to getting things off your mind. Feel free to comment, or not–– I'm on here very infrequently these days.


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    J'avance et je recule
    D'un pas, comme le tien, incertain
    I'm awake, a nightmare overwhelming:
    La déconstruction de ma vie me laisse incongrue
    incapable de réconcilier l'objet et le sujet.

    J'conteste l'idée que mes émotions m'appartiennent
    par seule raison d'être inconnaissables et inédites au monde;
    (c'est peut-être un reflex à raison oublié)
    mais par ce même coup, je me retrouve l'étranger.
    Dans une salle, seule mais avec autrui, ça m'épuise
    mais dans la salle adjacente je trouve le paradis.

    Quand mon coeur palpite avec une raison nouvelle,
    le monde entier est renouvelé sous mes yeux.
    Ce n'est qu'un mensonge, et je le connais bien:
    préférez-vous un monde sans amour, ou encore
    un monde sans mensonges?

    Ce
    cauchemar
    accablant.




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