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Author: Outlaw
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I had the words "nightmare overwhelming" stuck in my mind, so I thought I'd come back to the age old solution to getting things off your mind. Feel free to comment, or not–– I'm on here very infrequently these days.


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J'avance et je recule
D'un pas, comme le tien, incertain
I'm awake, a nightmare overwhelming:
La déconstruction de ma vie me laisse incongrue
incapable de réconcilier l'objet et le sujet.

J'conteste l'idée que mes émotions m'appartiennent
par seule raison d'être inconnaissables et inédites au monde;
(c'est peut-être un reflex à raison oublié)
mais par ce même coup, je me retrouve l'étranger.
Dans une salle, seule mais avec autrui, ça m'épuise
mais dans la salle adjacente je trouve le paradis.

Quand mon coeur palpite avec une raison nouvelle,
le monde entier est renouvelé sous mes yeux.
Ce n'est qu'un mensonge, et je le connais bien:
préférez-vous un monde sans amour, ou encore
un monde sans mensonges?

Ce
cauchemar
accablant.




Submitted on 2019-03-08 20:55:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  ou cares?
| Posted on 2019-10-18 00:00:00 | by Awkward | [ Reply to This ]
  ou son les graves, les acutes?!
| Posted on 2019-10-18 00:00:00 | by Awkward | [ Reply to This ]
  en ordre a faire un reponse
| Posted on 2019-10-18 00:00:00 | by Awkward | [ Reply to This ]
  i have to save this up for later...
| Posted on 2019-10-18 00:00:00 | by Awkward | [ Reply to This ]


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