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    dots Submission Name: We are Loved dots
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    Author: teika5
    ASL Info:    46 / m/ parts unknow
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 46/9/20
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Love
    Total Views: 692
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 666



    Description:
       I thought of this write, with people in mind.If we thought of what is the effect of a certain ,"Thing" then we as a whole could solve some issues effecting us as a whole. Right?


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    dotsWe are Loved dots
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    It is now that I feel it ,
    or, has/
    this action been with me..


    Ask any one ,
    the: They around you...


    The question is Love ,
    And; the ways of this verb,

    In any from ,
    Love is a nature blush in our Hearts,
    takes us on a whole new ride..

    Strange as it is ,
    to be loved is the all in all, be all..


    See; I said it ,and you didn't care.

    It's a fee expression ,
    a free ticket too..

    Come what may.
    the action is pain and pleasure,
    it is complete




    Submitted on 2019-03-10 17:35:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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