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    dots Submission Name: Generation Lost in Spacedots

    Author: teika5
    ASL Info:    46 / m/ parts unknow
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 46/9/20
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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       This pile of words are to alert and convey a real position with us all. A real setting in a real world , spinning and reeling . We would like to think that our high ups have us in good hands. I think we exhausted our time line and the real fact of this , is a strange ending . Still I believe it is manageable ,
    but not without its dangers .

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    dots Generation Lost in Spacedots

    Has anyone kept track,
    Of how exceptionally;
    Odd we have become .

    With all this new tech,
    within an out of us .

    The body has a multitude of forces
    bombarding and warping our minds.
    It's all those frequencies to keep up with.

    One in yesterday land just had beepers ,
    faxes , phones and those comic forces , ect.. /

    Now these multitude of those frequencies ,
    adding and subtracting ,"Us," /

    it would be undaunting to fathom ,
    and I am dam sure , the facts of this ,
    is: alarming , unnerving , and reeling "Us."
    toward a numbing effect of sort .

    So, the question is this ,
    "How weird have we become,
    knowingly willfully and confidently."

    How far from , "Our Truth,"
    have we strayed ?
    Are we ready or not ?;

    "No Worries" , and with , "No Fear ,
    will we answer these questions ;

    and with that ,
    the answer will still be incomplete

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