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    dots Submission Name: Happy Saint Patrick's Daydots
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    Author: poetotoe
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    dotsHappy Saint Patrick's Daydots
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    re-posted in the of Saint Patrick's Day


    Happy Saint Patrick's Day

    These embers of Ireland glow upon her fields of green
    Ireland's inheritance unique birthright of Ireland's own!
    Ireland’s sons and daughters to be found around the world.
    They come home in spirit, remember their family and friends
    when folklore returns to their hearts, passions in songs echo
    never so far, never to forget Ireland is their Emerald Home.

    Breath after breath behold the treasure of Ireland's past
    Ireland's Dear Sweet Love beckons all home to be free.
    There be loved and be true by Ireland's blessed kisses
    Ireland's spirit sets you free to live out your dreams.
    Fly across the ocean, an Irish Sea back to Ireland.

    Come home and be Irish today, a wee bit longer
    to be sure, to be true come back to dear Ireland
    united this Saint Patrick's Day in Erin's name.
    Sing an Irish lullaby, eat, drink and be merry
    for life and love be one in enchanted Ireland.

    Ireland awaits you to bestow her love upon you
    her lost sheep, fine lads and lassies call back home
    have the grandest time, Happy Saint Patrick's Day.
    Saint Patrick himself wishes you a Cead Mile Failte
    One Hundred Thousand Welcomes, Embrace Ireland.




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      I am part Irish, and this was stunning and enchanting. Thank you.
    | Posted on 2019-03-29 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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