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    Author: BestxDeceptions
    ASL Info:    22, Female, Kentucky.
    Elite Ratio:    2.22 - 25/66/50
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 313
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       My first poem in a verrryyy long time.


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    dotsIn case you didn't knowdots
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    If I wrote you 1000 words
    Would you read them?
    When I told you I was
    Scared
    Did you listen?

    When I whispered that I
    Loved you through jaded
    Glances, did you hear
    Me?

    Tragic and broken
    Beaten and scarred
    I gave you what
    Mattered

    I told you my tragedies.
    I wrote them down so you
    Could remember what I'll
    Never say aloud.

    So you can love me;
    I'm buried beneath my
    Vacant whispers and
    Jaded stares.

    Can you see me?

    I gave myself to you and you
    Promised I was safe there.
    I don't remember what that
    Feels like.

    When you left me there
    So completely at your mercy
    I cried. Cathartic and weak.
    I gave you what was left of me.

    I don't hear you.




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