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    dots Submission Name: Finding Brandydots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 311/245/330
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Riddle/Longing
    Total Views: 517
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    Bytes: 448



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    dotsFinding Brandydots
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    I am
    Subject, predicate and adjective
    I am
    All there is to know
    I am
    A lost cause amiss among all tragedy
    Comedy
    And Romance

    What is more
    I am
    The stale drink at the corner of the bar
    Waiting on my favorite drinker
    I am
    The suds blowing up at the top
    Carbon molecules soaring through the air

    I am
    Finding
    Brandy.




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