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    dots Submission Name: Endless Suffering of A Demented Pastdots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
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    dotsEndless Suffering of A Demented Pastdots
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    Crossing the forbidden fire in a delicate stage
    Wake up with shackles, chained to a small cage
    Forced to this scary place to be on the wrong page

    Listen for silence, it's all that I'm hearing
    Alone on this abandoned ship, fighting and steering
    Finding a way before the clock turns to gearing

    Too many tragedies dredged from the fire
    Nobody sees me on the invisible live wire
    Waiting for the moment I succumb to a desire

    This cotton armor is no place for me to hide
    Inside these dirty walls that I must abide by
    Looking around for a safe place to close my eyes

    Sinking deeper into the pit of my destruction
    Feeling the unwanted, intense internal eruption
    Lying on the floor, overwhelmed by this corruption

    The colors fading quickly from my distorted vision
    Finding another way to keep all of this hidden
    To curl up inside and abuse my afflictions

    Never having all the answers for closure
    The little girl inside will always have to suffer
    Whether with a friend, or some kind of lover

    Most of these abusers will never care to see
    How their actions have greatly effected me
    Why am I still here if this is how it has to be




    Submitted on 2019-04-14 17:27:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      abuse isn't just in the moment. it stays with people and changes how they are able to see the world and themselves. some people come out the other side stronger some come out weaker but most don't remain the same. hopefully this isn't about a personal experience with abuse, but if it is i hope you've found a way to remove yourself from it. thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2019-04-18 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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