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    dots Submission Name: Buddydots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.76 - 19/70/88
    Words: 368
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       I wrote this for my beautiful Sun Conure, Buddy, while he was fighting for his life. He was my everything. Without him I feel lost and broken. I was lucky and honored to be the one to take care of him. He had only love to give to me. I wish I could describe just how amazing he was.

    Unfortunately, a short while after I wrote this, I had to make the best decision for him, as I said in this piece "I'll lay you down with your bright and broken feathers." And so I did. He is no longer suffering. Rest in Peace, my sweet, handsome angel.


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    dotsBuddydots
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    Staring out the window after more bad news
    Tried to act like it wasn't going to phase me
    Was told you needed someone to care for you
    But how could that someone ever be me

    Waited a while before I took you home
    I just watched you while you screamed at me
    There was no way I could have ever known
    Just how much you were gonna need me

    You need me now more than ever
    You're more than under the weather
    And if for some reason you can never get better
    I'll lay you down with your bright and broken feathers
    And hold you deep inside my heart forever and ever

    I told you that you're my handsome little boy
    And I'm thinking you can stay for a long while
    I let you out of that old rusty broken cage
    And you showed me your beautiful permanent smile

    How could you be so wonderful to me
    When you had no reason to trust anybody
    And how could you so sweetly kiss me on the cheek
    Like we've been best friends forever, my Buddy

    You need me now more than ever
    You're more than under the weather
    And if for some reason you can never get better
    I'll lay you down with your bright and broken feathers
    And hold you deep inside my heart forever and ever

    It always makes me smile to see your little face
    To imagine life without you just makes me cry
    But if that day comes, I will hold you in my arms
    And with a kiss on the beak I will say a last goodbye

    You need me now more than ever
    You're more than under the weather
    And if for some reason you can never get better
    I'll lay you down with your bright and broken feathers
    And hold you deep inside my heart forever and ever

    But I need you now more than ever
    I'm more than under the weather
    And if for some reason I can never get better
    You'll wrap me in your wings with your bright and broken feathers
    And hold me deep inside your heart forever and ever




    Submitted on 2019-04-14 17:36:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sweet and heartfelt. I'm sorry for your loss. Fur/feather babies are some of the best people in the world; I know what if feels like to lose an animal friend.
    May Buddy's sunshine yellow memories warm your soul..
    <3 Doh
    | Posted on 2019-04-27 00:00:00 | by rememberplaydoh | [ Reply to This ]


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