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    dots Submission Name: bleeding part onedots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 311/245/330
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    dotsbleeding part onedots
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    in the hollow ways do i pace
    a remainder of what's to entrance
    with my future i become a different race
    with my eventual demise i become a different agony
    to God
    hypnotized by death and its ideals
    flayed at the hips in bare flesh
    i'm having them grabbed by the hands of those before me.




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