| I really enjoyed this.. mostly. |
You almost lost me with how long the beginning is. Maybe that was your point? Personally, I think the poem would be improved by condensing the lead up to "I want to know more"
...everything beyond that point is Brilliant. I particularly love the way you incorporate specific scientific language. And your last line is beautifully impactful.
Keep up the good work!
|| Posted on 2019-04-25 00:00:00 | by rememberplaydoh | [ Reply to This ] |