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Author:	rememberplaydoh
Elite Ratio:	4.21 - 78/102/60
Words:	39

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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Up in Smoke dots

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(written 01/13/16)

We burn our dreams..
holding the flame,
we watch the green turn to ash.
The smoke burns our lungs
and our eyes
and yet,
we find ourselves sated,
exhilarated,
intoxicated,
From these ashes rise new dreams.

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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