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    dots Submission Name: Up in Smokedots
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    Author: rememberplaydoh
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    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsUp in Smokedots
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    (written 01/13/16)

    We burn our dreams..
    holding the flame,
    we watch the green turn to ash.
    The smoke burns our lungs
    and our eyes
    and yet,
    we find ourselves sated,
    exhilarated,
    intoxicated,
    From these ashes rise new dreams.




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