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Author: rememberplaydoh
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Words: 46
Class/Type: Poetry /Nature
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A reflection from/on/about the space where I find my peace - outside, beside the train tracks. A meditation.


(written 03/28/19)

The buzzing of the lines...
The hum of distant traffic...
Sun Rises
A train crawls past...
A plane flies overhead...
Sun Sets
wind blows
Clouds float pink and orange...
Three stars shine against the blue...
Moon Rises
The buzzing of the lines...

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